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Oct 11, 2016 at 15:47 vote accept Byte Lab
Oct 8, 2016 at 16:31 comment added Dirk I see. However, your formulation looks fine to me, nothing impolite about it
Oct 8, 2016 at 16:29 comment added Byte Lab Hi Dirk, @jmite points out one of my concerns here. While I could simply state my improvements, I think pointing out flaws in the previous work also highlights and clarifies the point I'm trying to make. For example, if I say, "I did <x>, which has <y> benefits", it's (arguably) less clear than saying, "The previous work did <x>. This won't work for <u>, <v>, and <w> reasons. My work is <y>, which addresses these reasons because <a>, <b>, <c>." By pointing out the flaws in the previous technique, it forms a more cohesive argument and exposition.
Oct 8, 2016 at 14:51 comment added Dirk Well, make the contributions explicit. I don't see why this can only be done impolitely.
Oct 8, 2016 at 14:45 comment added Joey Eremondi That's a tough one. My worry is that you'll get feedback from reviewers saying the contributions over previous work were not made explicit enough...
Oct 8, 2016 at 3:13 history answered Dirk CC BY-SA 3.0