I'm a computer science student from Iran. I'm applying for student visa to study master in Germany. Germany's embassy requires students to write a motivation letter in visa process.
For the summer semester 2016 I have received admission from TU Darmstadt, TU Stuttgart and university of Freiburg. Also I have been rejected from TU Dresden. For the reason of course contents, I have chosen to study in TU Darmstadt.
I have written above paragraph in my motivation letter. Is this considered negative to write such things (compare universities or list my admission results)?