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I finished my report and want to submit it. What should I write in the email?

My version:

Please find attached the research paper. I have attached it to the body of this email in doc format, plus an extra version in pdf format in case you have difficulty accessing the file.

I want to end it with something like this: "I will wait your comments."

Should I add the sentence above to the email?

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  • To whom are you sending this?
    – user9482
    Commented Dec 8, 2021 at 15:00
  • @Roland intership supervisor Commented Dec 8, 2021 at 15:01
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    In that case, I prefer to get a feeling for the timeline. Something like "I'm looking forward to your comments and feedback. When do you think you will be able to send them?" and maybe ask what you should do in the meantime.
    – user9482
    Commented Dec 8, 2021 at 15:05
  • I'm skeptical that your question is on-topic. It looks more suitable for ell.stackexchange.com or interpersonal.stackexchange.com.
    – user9482
    Commented Dec 8, 2021 at 15:08
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    I prefer my suggestion because it expresses in a respectful and polite way that you expect feedback. Usually, you can expect it from your internship supervisor.
    – user9482
    Commented Dec 8, 2021 at 15:16

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There is nothing improper about what you suggest. But capitalize and punctuate it properly, of course.

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  • how to write in email "i will wait your comments" politely? Commented Dec 8, 2021 at 15:01
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    Assuming English: "I await your comments.". You can even say something like "Thank you for any comments."
    – Buffy
    Commented Dec 8, 2021 at 15:03
  • what about : I would be grateful for any feedback or comments Commented Dec 8, 2021 at 15:08
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    Excellent. Do that.
    – Buffy
    Commented Dec 8, 2021 at 15:50
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I usually put a "thank you"-kind like message if the email contains a request or similar.

"Thank you for your guidance" or "I would be grateful for any comments or suggestions. Thank you."

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