I have one article accepted in the magazine and the editorial team has send me the proof-read version. I have a little issue that I need to change the name of the article as the requirement of my thesis. The article was accepted with the name "Future trends in Personal indoor communication". I want to change it to "Future trends in indoor communication". I will really appreciate if the seniors can comment on my following response.
Dear Mr. Editor,
Thank you for accepting the article titled, “Future trends in Personal Indoor Communication” for publication in IEEE Potentials. As part of the proof-read stage, I would request a minor change in the title. Since my modified PhD thesis title includes “Indoor Communication”, instead of “Personal Indoor Communication”, I will really appreciate if the editor allows me to reflect this change in the mentioned article. This is important to maintain the coherency between my published work and the PhD thesis.
The modification in the title will subsequently require minor (editorial) changes in the text as well. For example, Personal Indoor Communication (or PIC) should be replaced by Indoor Communication (or IC) in the text. Likewise, Fig. 2 should be modified to reflect this change. For this purpose, I have attached the new figure as the supplementary material.
Please do let me know if this is possible. I apologize for the inconvenience it may cause to the publishing team.
On behalf of the Authors