My sense is that broad platitudes, clichés, and self-compliments like the ones you've included are not going to be particularly helpful. I would skip them.

Stick to the basics. There are many websites and templates online that will help give you a sense for what is appropriate and expected. In general, the risk of trying to be creative, especially when you don't have a good sense of your audience or what is expecting, will probably outweigh the potential benefits. If the problem is that your CV is short and weak, there are other questions like this one that might be of some help.

Most importantly, make sure that you have your CV carefully proofread by a native speaker. Both of your two examples sentences are written in poor English. If you put those sentences at the top of your CV, you're going to be sending a message that you probably would rather not.

My sense is that broad platitudes, clichés, and self-compliments like the ones you've included are not going to be particularly helpful. I would skip them.

Stick to the basics. There are many websites and templates online that will help give you a sense for what is appropriate and expected. In general, the risk of trying to be creative, especially when you don't have a good sense of your audience or what is expecting, will probably outweigh the potential benefits. If the problem is that your CV is short and weak, there are other questions like this one that might be of some help.

Most importantly, make sure that you have your CV carefully proofread by a native speaker. Both of your two examples sentences are written in poor English. If you put those sentences at the top of your CV, you're going to be sending a message that you probably would rather not.

My sense is that broad platitudes, clichés, and self-compliments like the ones you've included are not going to be particularly helpful. I would skip them.

Stick to the basics. There are many websites and templates online that will help give you a sense for what is appropriate and expected. In general, the risk of trying to be creative, especially when you don't have a good sense of your audience or what is expecting, will probably outweigh the potential benefits. If the problem is that your CV is short and weak, there are other questions like this one that might be of some help.

Most importantly, make sure that you have your CV carefully proofread by a native speaker. Both of your two examples sentences are written in poor English. If you put that those sentences at the top of your CV, you're going to be sending a message that you probably would rather not.

My sense is that broad platitudes, clichés, and self-compliments like the ones you've included are not going to be particularly helpful. I would skip them.

Stick to the basics. There are many websites and templates online that will help give you a sense for what is appropriate and expected. In general, the risk of trying to be creative, especially when you don't have a good sense of your audience or what is expecting, will probably outweigh the potential benefits. If the problem is that your CV is short and weak, there are other questions like this one that might be of some help.

Most importantly, make sure that you have your CV carefully proofread by a native speaker. Both of your two examples sentences are written in poor English. If you put those sentences at the top of your CV, you're going to be sending a message that you probably would rather not.